英語作文技巧瞬間便爲老師眼中的高手,以無恥對無恥

[轉] 英語作文技巧瞬間便爲老師眼中的高手，以無恥對無恥 2013-2-8 23:10

進入正題之前，先教你們幾個當時我最喜歡我最喜歡用的裝酷小技巧，首先就是very這個單詞，以後不要再用了，弄哪個那，extraordinary！這個單詞高中生會用的不多，不用掌握什麼用法，就記住用very的地方都可以替換成這個，絕對比用very拉風！然後那，however這個單詞不知道你們掌握得好不好，教大家一個玩賴的技巧，一個句子+逗號+however+另一個句子，這裏面however是沒有實際意義的，就是錶轉折，但你可以用這招把兩個簡單句捏在一塊啊！短句子成長句了！第三個，第三個，就是把很簡單的句子，用一點小技巧，改成比較無恥的倒裝句！舉個例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎麼說？I not only sing, but also dance，改動一下，not only do I sing, but also dance.倒裝句！（雖然簡單且無恥，但誰敢說這不是倒裝句？）此方法最適合倒裝句掌握的不好的同學寫出來騙批卷老師：大哥（姐）我會倒裝句！

important？這是土人用的！牛人用什麼？牛人用significant！由於怎麼說？as a result？土人！牛人用什麼？牛人用as a consequence. 所以怎麼說？so？土人！牛人怎麼說？牛人用therefore！（別看therefore這個單詞簡單，知道用它代替so的同學不多啊！）舉個例子，I got up early，therefore I was late. 類似的替換的單詞很多，比如以後set這個單詞不要用了，替換成establish。 越來越好怎麼說？ 土人也許會用better and better，牛人只用一個單詞：enhance 造個句子 we need to enhance our English，就等於better and better。 好怎麼說？土人用good，比他們強一點的人也許會用great

好怎麼說？土人用good，比他們強一點的人也許會用great ， wonderful，但牛人用什麼？牛人用gorgeous，更牛的人用fabulous，簡單的替換一下，水平立刻顯現出不一樣了。不想要怎麼說？土人會用unwanted，牛人用unsatisfactory。改變怎麼說？土人用change，牛人用transform。類似的替換技巧有很多，但由於時間太長了多數都忘了，你們自己也可以總結積累一下，不要做土人，做牛人！ 以上的問題解決了，我們來說一下語法，從句。相信很多同學掌握的不是很好，我教大家一些簡單的技巧？首先弄清句子的最主要成分是什麼？主語加謂語。不管大家寫多複雜的句子，一定記住不管寫多複雜的句子，沒有謂語動詞不叫句子！接下來具體地說語法的技巧：

? 有一個很簡單的從句，叫賓語從句，I think that...... 沒有人不會用吧，不過我奉勸大家儘量別這麼用，老師批10張卷子看到了8張裏面有I think that不煩嗎？如果一定要用賓語從句的話換一種說法：I have a thought that......別看只改動了一點，同位語從句！同樣I hear that誰都會用吧，不過同樣誰都會用所以我們不要用！厲害一些的人會用：It is reported that...... 不過真正的牛人用There is a piece of news that 同樣的意思，但明顯比I hear that要帥！還有一種從句叫定語從句很多人也願意用，不過我建議大家不要用，因爲其實在英語裏，定語從句是種挺白癡的句子，沒人說的！（你們看美國大片時發現過有人說定語從句嗎？）不過如果大家非要用我教大家一個必殺！很少有人知道的！其實定語從句是可以並列排比的！這招湊字數最好使，寫出來也挺酷的。這招湊字數最好使，寫出來也挺酷的。舉個例子，我喜歡玩籃球，然後籃球有很多種特點，就可以把這些特點用定語從句的形式並列出來：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......其實在上千年前，我們的老祖宗就會這麼用了，大家學過韓愈的師說吧，裏面有句話：師者，所以傳道授業解惑也。這就是個經典的定語從句，翻譯過來就是teacher is a job who傳道，who授業and who 解惑。這種定語從句你要是用出來絕對能嚇批卷老師一跳！

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?還有種用法叫後置定語有人感覺挺難吧，其實記住個例子就行了，穿着比基尼的女孩a girl w

ho wears a bikini，變成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，這就是後置定語，很簡單吧

語法的問題不也解決了嗎，接下來就教大家一些細節地方上的技巧，首先因爲什麼怎麼說?

because 絕大多數人都用這個單詞，教大家一個很絕的用法，逗號+for 就可以代替because！

舉個例子，我總聽李孝利的歌，因爲我喜歡李孝利：I often hear the songs of 李孝利，fo

r I love her 中間的逗號+for就相當於because，同樣，掌握這個用法的同學不多！

儘管怎麼說？土人們although，而牛人用In spite of 舉個例子，儘管你是女生你也不能欺負我！In spite of the fact that you are 女生，you can't 欺負 me！

時間狀語大家掌握的都不錯吧，一看到她媽媽，小女生一下就哭了，用when就是土人！直接寫seeing her mother，the girl cried

還有首先是first吧，以後大家可以寫first and foremost，和first一個意思，但看上去牛X的多，另外，用到這個用法時還可以用到一個簡單的插入結構 主語，first and foremost，謂語這就是一個插入結構，我在前面還講了一個however吧，這個單詞放到句子中是沒什麼意義的，就是爲了裝酷！同樣可以用到這：主語，however，謂語插入結構！

有一個句式說：“?for the simple reason that?”表示某種現象的原因是什麼。然而，很多同學一談到原因仍然是“?because?”如果要表示“總是能夠”的概念，很多同學提筆就會寫can always，但理想的句子應該是用雙重否定表示強烈的肯定，用never fail to。

注意英語中一些表達上的習慣。比如在正式文體的寫作中，很少用 “it isn’t”這樣的略縮形式，而是 “it is not”。同理，在正式文體中的日期一般不縮寫，阿拉伯數字一般會用英文表達(特別長的數字除外)。

許多同學在寫作文時，習慣於把 “since” “because” “for”這樣的詞放在句首引導原因狀語從句。事實上，在我們見到的英語報刊雜誌文章中，這樣的從句一般都是放在主句之後的。另外, “and”也常常被誤放在一句話的開頭，表示兩個句子之間的並列或遞進關係。其實，經常留心地道的英語文章能發現，如果是並列關係，完全可以不用連詞；如果是遞進關係，用 “further more” “what is more”更爲普遍

According to（根據）??題目大意??I believe that（我認爲） ??你的觀點

far as we know（我們都知道）??題目大意??from my point of view (我認爲)??你的觀點First （首先）??second（其次）??at last (最後)??

First（首先）??and then (然後)??in conclusion（最後，總之）

As far as we know（我們都知道）??moreover（而且，此外）??

specially（特 別是）??in conclusion（最後，總之）表並列：similarly同樣的 / in the same way 以同樣的方式

錶轉折：however/but但是

表對比：not that ?but that?不是?而是?/ one hand? the other hand一方面?另一方面?/ unlike?與?不同/not so much??與其?不如?

表目的：for the???.爲了?

表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以

表例證：for example

表假設：if如果

表讓步：although?雖然??（注意：後不可接but！雖然但是不可這樣連用）/of course 當然?/clearly?顯然?

All in all（總的來說）??

by and large （總的來說）??

+in my opinion（我認爲）??

no matter how（不管怎樣）??

on the whole（總的來說）

◆ 相關過渡語

1).表示時間順序:first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last?

2).表示空間順序:near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side?

3).表示比較、對照:like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary ,never the less, otherwise?

4).表示因果關係:because, for, as a result, therefore, thus?

5).表示遞進關係:besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of?

6).表示並列關係:and, as well as, also?

7).表示總結性:in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude

1．occur 替換 think of

Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →

An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

2．devote替換spend

He spends all his spare time in reading. →

He devotes all his spare time to reading.

3．seek替換want / look for

They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.

4．average 替換ordinary

I’ man average ( ordinary ) student.

5．but替換very

The film we saw last night was very interesting. →

The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.

The film we saw last night was anything but boring.

6．seat 替換sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.

7．is supposed to替換should

He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.

8．appreciate 替換thank

Thank you very much for you help. →

We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.

9．the case替換 true

I don’t think it is the case ( true ).

10．on替換as soon as

As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research..

to替換because of

He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.

12．cover替換walk/read

After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.

13．contribute to替換 be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →

Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.

14．round the corner 替換 coming soon/nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).

15．come to light替換discover

The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →

The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.

a ball替換have a good time/ enjoy oneself

After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a

good time ).

17．come up with替換think of

Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.

18．set aside替換save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.

19．be of + n. 替換adj.

The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.

20．refer to 替換talk about/of, mention

The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous

cannot but / can not help but替換have to do

I could not but (had to) go home.

22．more often than not替換usually

More often than not (Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.

23．lest替換so that /in order that

I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. →

I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.

24. be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替換want to do sth./wish for

I want to see you very much. →I am long to see you.

25．be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替換be interested in He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps

26．more than替換very① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September. → I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.

② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help

ect(ly) 替換good/very wellHe speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).

28．do sb a/the favor 替換helpWould you please dome the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?

29．the other day替換a few days agoThe other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.

30．in the course of替換duringIn the course of(During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.

31．the majority of替換most

ist of替換be made up ofOur class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.

33．be worn out替換 be tired / broken① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out(tired).② My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.

34．become of替換 happenWhat do think has become of ( happened to ) him ?

35．attend to替換look after36．on condition that替換as long as

37．nevertheless替換however

38．express one’s satisfaction with替換be satisfied with

39．spare no effort

40．be rushed off one’s feet 替換be busy in doing

42．a handful of替換a little / some43．meanwhile替換at the same time

44．get to one’s feet替換stand up45．beneath替換under

46．occasionally替換sometimes /once in while47．for instance替換for example

48．seldom替換not often49．wealthy替換 rich50．amazing替換surprising

51．as a matter of fact替換in fact