留學文書的寫作技巧之選擇專業與理想

留學文書的寫作技巧之選擇專業與理想

選擇專業和選擇學校常常是相關的。主要是通過自己的經歷或是背景講述個人如何熱愛某專業、學校或是某種職業。

寫作要領：

1.從自身對專業興趣的起源、學習經歷出發，可以描述一下家庭環境的影響。

2.對學校的該專業的教育有所瞭解，強調自己認同學校的教育理念、教育方法。

【精彩例文】

Tell us about your academic goals, circumstances that may have had an impact on your academic performance，and, in general, anything else you would like us to know in making an admission decision.

In China, we are never short of news, even explosive news. I am concerned about what is happening in my motherland because I hope I can see through China and change it into a better country. That is one of the reasons why I want to study economics. I choose economics as my major not because I want to earn money for myself, but because I want to do something for my country, to make people live a better life. There are many economic issues that closely related to ordinary people and the sky rocketing prices of housing in China is one of them.

It is impossible nowadays for young people in China, especially those from big cities like Beijing and Shanghai, to afford an apartment by themselves. In Beijing it is not even possible with the support of parents. The problem is partly caused by the large population and the transitional situation in China. The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming larger and larger. The government, having the intention of lowering people，s aspiration of buying houses, has not figured out how to control the housing market effectively.

In the past few years, I have been reading reports from different media inside and outside China in order to get a more reasonable understanding of the issue. It concerns every citizen in China and affects the stability of the whole society. While the developers are earning more and more money, ordinary people are bearing heavy

economic burdens. I have seen many young people feeling depressed and couples break up because of the problem.

Therefore, I want to bring a change to the current situation. I know it is a difficult problem and I cannot solve the problem with my own power. But I am willing to do my own bit to make young people live a free, easy life, and to make parents enjoy their peaceftil life.

【未來】

中國永遠不缺少新聞，也不缺少爆炸性新聞。我很關心在中國的土地上發生的事情因爲我希望我能夠更瞭解它，讓它變得更好。這是我爲什麼想要學習經濟的原因之一。我選擇經濟作爲我的專業並不是因爲我想要爲自己賺更多的財富，而是希望能夠幫助人們過上更好的生活。很多經濟問題都和尋常百姓息息相關，而中國不斷攀升的房價就是其中之一。

現在中國的年輕人很難能夠依靠自己的能力買房子，特別是在像北京和上海這樣的大城市生活的年輕人就更加困難。在北京，如果沒有父母的資助的話，買房子幾乎是件不可能的事情。這個問題一部分是由於中國過於龐大的人口和城市化進程造成的。中國的貧富差距在不斷地擴大。政府想要降低人們購買房子的意願，然而卻沒能找出一個有效的方法來調控房地產市場。

在過去的幾年中，我一直在關注中國媒體和國外媒體對中國房地產市場的報道，以期對這個問題有着更加理性的理解。這個問題關係着中國的每個公民，並且影響着整個社會的穩定。當房地產開發商積 累起越來越多的財富，普通百姓卻承擔者越來越重的經濟負擔。我曾經見到過很多年輕人沮喪的神情，也曾目睹很多情侶因爲房子的問題而分道揚鑣。

因此，我希望能夠改變中國房地產行業的現狀。我知道這是一個很複雜的問題，我也沒辦法依靠自 己的力量去解決它。但是我願意做出自己的努力，幫助年輕人過上更加輕鬆自由的生活，讓他們的父母過上更加平靜的生活。

【佳文精評】

美國大學的申請文章中總是會問到申請者將來的職業發展目標以及申請者關注的領域。經濟可以說是每年申請者最熱門的選擇之一。這就給申請者提出了一個很嚴峻的挑戰：如何從衆多的申請 者中脫穎而出，如何讓招生辦公室的老師真切地感受到你對經濟的熱情而非只是隨波逐流，人云亦云。這篇範文便給出了一個答案：從小處着手，從你切實關心的經濟問題着手。作者通過對中國房 價不斷攀高這一問題的細緻剖析與讀者產生了情感的共鳴，讓讀者感受到了作者對經濟問題的真切關注以及想要爲中國經濟發展做出貢獻的意願。這樣的申請文章讓人感覺言之有物，不會讓人感到空洞乏味。