復旦、交大自主招生英語應試指導及真題詳解-第_8_講：作文寫作技巧與注意事項

第 七 講：英 語 寫 作 （二）

大作文

往年試題：

Directions: write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below.

Sample 1

My View on Playing Computer Games

1. 有人認爲學生打電腦遊戲有利於智力開發。

2. 有人認爲學生打電腦遊戲妨礙學習。

3. 我的觀點。

Sample 2：對貧富差距加大現象談談看法

評分標準

Global scoring

a. Content

b. Language

2分:條理不清， 思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數爲嚴重錯誤。

5分：基本切題。表達思想不清，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。

8分：有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤較多，其中有一些嚴重錯誤。

11分：切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤

14分：切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上沒有語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。

注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個獨立的詞而無法表達思想，給0分。

嚴重錯誤——語法錯誤

There are many reasons caused the accident.

The driver of the car no in.

The life is becoming gooder and gooder.

That day rain bigly.

The man who through the street

The car which in a fast speed hit him.

The car which in a fast speed hit him.

I got the place where happened the accident. ————————————————————————————————————————————

第1頁

Our city would happen many traffic.

寫作注意事項

1. 審好題，想好再寫，不要寫了又劃掉，也不要寫完了發現字數不夠有寫，這樣整篇

文章就不聯貫了。

2. 把握好文章的重心，一般“我的觀點”應該是重心。

3. 注意寫作的格式——縮進式或齊頭式。

4. 拿不準的詞、短語或用法應避免使用。

5. 表達要清晰、簡潔，不必一味追求結構的複雜而儘可能多的使用從句，這樣文章會

顯得很羅嗦。如：The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast.

6. 注意用詞和搭配。

7. 檢查-s和-ed，儘量避免嚴重錯誤。

Choice of Words

e levels of English words

English native words(core)informal(oral)

French or Spanish words

Latin or Greek words (academic words)formal (written)

Examples

EnglishFrench or SpanishLatin or Greek

askinquireinterrogate

breakseverseparate

fireflameconflagration

houseaboderesidence

kinglyroyalregal

manlymalemasculine

risemountascend

timeageepoch

I know thatI am aware that

I believe thatI am convinced that

I have a good idea.A good idea occurs to me.

Causegive rise to

Emphasizelay emphasis on

Because ofdue to, owing to

Stop, endcome to a stop/end

Suddenlyall of a sudden

Oftenmore often than not

2. Connotation of Words (English explanation)

common, peasant, assassinate, gay, acquire, date, property, enemy, problem, issue

3. General Vs Specific terms (overuse of general terms)

beautiful, delicious, famous,

China’s English

小康社會、緣分、丞相、風水、三個代表 孔子、孟子、老子

容易用錯的詞

1. 詞性

lack, serve, contact, last, marry, concern, like

2. 漢語影響

more perfect, very excellent, return back, repeat again, good memory power, listening ability, high quality goods learn the knowledge

常見錯誤

(1) two predicates in one simple sentence

Every year lots of familys sit at the front of TV wait this game after have delicious e have many people like SFG.

My mother cooks food is very delicious.

(2) Omission and overuse of Be

Nowday people’s life level is arise.

Many person are like watch SFG in the eve.

SFG was appeared since 1984.

SFG is liked by many people.

How fast time was gone!

SFG can divide into several parts.

We very busy.

(3) Comparative degree

more and more better

become gooder and gooder,

(4) Conjunction

because…

although…

While

(5) I very like hate

(6) Part of speech

most of we Chinese, make me surprise,

with the quick development of economic and social,

In my’s opinion, I advice to keep SFG.

eating good, drinking good, playing good;

good plays, good look, good use;

I think it dues to the development,

Let’s analysis and discovery the main factors leading the changes.

To men, women just liked clothes. they like it like me like it.

two weeks past

choose, choice, succeed, success, successful, die, dead, death

(7) Choice of words

The whole family assemble to have a dinner.

congratulate Spring Festival,

abolish (stop, give up) SFG,

sit behind the TV to look SFG,

Many people fall in love with watching SFG.

We can elect other programs to see.

celebrate SFG with bomb,

stand in the shadow/shade

mosquito bite/sting

It’s a gay meeting/party

(8) Phrases

in all in; one hand, another hand, third hand; at one hand, at second hand, at last hand; in one hand, from other hand; last but not the last, last but not most; on my opinion; A coin has two hands (coins). Everything has two hands (coins).

(9) Spelling

We can’t cansle (cancer, cancle) it.

SFG is watched by hole word.

happyness,

include (ing) SF, Every student include me enjoys

Poor people maybe very angry (hungry).

eat the soap (soup);

Benefitial

Drived

Dispite

I will adopt to the campus life

聯 貫

1. 並列：

and,as well as

on the one hand… on the other hand

for one thing… another

firstly…ndly…dly…finally

subsequently,then,thereafter, afterward, in the following …

at first,initially,originally

at last,eventually

2. 遞進：

Moreover,

Furthermore,

In addition,

Additionally

What is more

Besides

Apart from…

3. 轉折

But

Yet

However

Nevertheless

While

Whereas

On the contrary

In contrast

4. 結果

So

Therefore,

Thus

Hence

As a result （consequence）

Consequently

5. 原因

Because (of)

Due to

Owing to

On the account of

In view of

Thanks to

On the grounds that

6. 假設

If…..

Given that

Provided that

Unless

On the condition of

As (so) long as

7. 其他

(1) Sentence adverbs: absolutely, alternatively, currently, undoubtedly, certainly, consequently, subsequently , obviously

(2) PP: in general, on average, in fact, in effect, in theory, in practice, in reality, in particular,

(3) Adv speaking: generally speaking, broadly speaking, strictly speaking, theoretically speaking

(4) precisely because, mainly because, merely because, only because

段落用語

Beginning:

With the development of

As is well known to

We all know that

As we all know

As a proverb says,

As a saying goes

As for… some people hold the opinion that…. While others

argue (maintain) that

Every coin has two sides.

It has merits and demerits.

It has pros and cons. Supporters and opponents

Development

Recent researches have proven/shown/indicated that

My arguments/reasons/ideas will be listed as follows:

In the following paragraph, I will

Firstly, secondly, and finally

Why is it that …..

Ending

All in all

In a word

In conclusion

In short

In summary

To sum up

To summarize

In brief

其他用語

be deeply rooted in

be in favor of

be opposed to

It goes without saying that

The past twenty years saw/witness

Chances are

No wonder

It is likely that

As time goes by

When it comes to

As illustrated/shown in the chart/table

面試：

面試的教授專業領域涵蓋所有現有學科（人文科學、社會科學、技術科學、自然科學、學生德育五大類）,每大類組隨機抽取1人,組成一個面試五人小組。面試前,教授們將審閱考生的各種資料,包括考生們所提交的入學申請材料和水平測試成績等。面試時,由教授對學生一對一面試,每名學生都要“連闖五關”,與5位專家面對面交談,累計面試時間超過1個小時。專家組將從學生博學、社會實踐、興趣、創新能力、時政瞭解、思想性等多方面考察學生的綜合素質,並依據面試結果作出是否錄取的建議。

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