九年級作文指導

九年級英語寫作指導

一．評分標準：

作文一律按檔給分，與錯誤個數無直接關係。

影響作文分數的因素：

1 題目要求、內容要點；

2 句子準確、通順；

3 層次結構清晰；

4 拼寫、語法等錯誤；

5 卷面整潔度；

二．做題步驟：

1 審題：審清作文體裁（類型）時態、人稱等細節；

2 列提綱（文章結構框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內容；

3 寫作：在提綱的基礎上補充要點；

4 複查：2遍——1遍看查拼寫、語法、標點等問題；2遍不出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等；

5 謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。

*總之做到三審：體裁、時態、人稱；

三思：詞彙—>短語—>句式；

三查：要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。

作文一般框架：

文章分3段：

（1）綜述：概括性強，最多2句話引入主題；

（2）正文——主要內容：層次性強，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面，每個方面最多2句話；

（3）結尾：緊扣主題，2句話內結束，儘量昇華。

Para2: （利）First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share… with…; Last, express views free, money-free…

Para3: （弊）However, one coin has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of time——affect study; On the other hand, not safe——stolen, hurt feelings

Para4: （個人）As a student, make good use of it.

常見的作文類型模板：

1 書信

Dear ...,

I’m glad to receive your letter…

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Best wishes!

a書信開頭常用語

? I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you).

?Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well?

…/Yours,Lucy

?I’m writing to you for some advice on how to…

?I’m writing to ask if you can ...

?How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met.

?Thank you for inviting me to ….

b 書信結尾常用語

? Best wishes (to/for you).

? Wish you good luck.

? (I am) looking forward to hearing from you.

常見的作文類型提綱模板：

2 圖表、數字比例型

（提出討論或調查的事實）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to)… Here are the results.

（表達出不同看法或觀點）Most students think … While … 20% of them choose to…. Another 15 believe… There are also some… saying that… （表達個人看法） As a student, I agree to…

3 說明利弊型

Nowadays … is becoming more and more popular.

It has many advantages . First, 優點1… Besides, 優點2…

However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺點1… On the other hand, 缺點2…

In my opinion,個人觀點 …

4 不同觀點型

We made a survey about whether we should …提出矛盾問題. Different people hold different ideas.

Some believe …正方觀點. First, 原因1… Besides, 原因2…

While others don’t agree. They think…反方觀點. On one hand, 原因1… On the other hand, 原因2…

As for me,個人觀點 …

5 解決問題型

Recently, the … problem has been more and more serious. …should do something to solve tly, 方法1… Secondly, 方法2… Finally, 方法3…

I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to …, the … will become better and better.

常用過渡性詞語

敘事文常用的句子間連接詞：

At first; at last; in the end…

then/next/after that…

when/while/as soon as/not… until…

at the same time; at times; once in a while;

so that

To one’s surprise/joy

Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…

in a word/in all

議論文常用連接詞

表示並列：either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also;

表示遞進的：besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover);

表示原因的：because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; (for the reason that…);

表示結果的：so; as a result; so…that…; therefore;

表示目的的：so that…; in order that…; (in order) to…; for…;

表示對比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…;

作文萬能句式

I will work hard to make my dream come takes sb. +時間+to do…

Sb. spend（某種人稱時態）+時間/錢+on sth./ (in) doing sth.

It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to v…

It’s nice/kind of sb. to v..

It’s time for sb. to do sth.

It’s a waste of time to…

It’s …years/days since sb. +ved

It’s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing

It’s a pity that…

It’s an honor to…

I’m/We’re not allowed to …

I’m afraid of making mistakes…

There be …doing…

Great changes have taken place in…

sth is/are well worth v-ing.

It seems/seemed that…

It seems (im)possible to v…

It is said that…

As the saying goes, …

…and …. are different in many ways.

too + adj./adv. to do

There are many differences between … and …

I have made up my mind to …

I am sure that…

I am not sure whether/if…

I would rather …. than …

It doesn’t matter if…

Thank you for v-ing.

If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better. 作文萬能短語

have/look for a chance to do

do outdoor activities

be/get used to (doing) sth.

learn…from…

be proud of/ take pride in…

play an important/active part/role in…

agree with sb. to do sth.

with the help of sb.=with one’s help (反義：without one’s help) be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth.

pay attention to…

take good care of …

make friends with…

get on/along well with …

wish you successful/success

as time goes by…

graduate from…

looking back to the past three years,…（用現在完成時態） pass the (final) exam

stick to doing

keep you mind on your goals

make up one’s mind to do sth. (on sth.)

make a decision to do

work hard at English

once in a while/ at times/ now and then

from then on

in the future（將來）/ in future（從今以後）

increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary

in fact/as a matter of fact

in the beginning/ at first

feel like giving up

have trouble/difficulty in (doing) sth.

have (no) time to do

have experience in (doing) sth.

follow one’s advice/suggestions

master some basic … skills

be required to do

ask sb. for help

can’t wait to do

be supposed to do

encourage sb. to do

deal/do with …

work out/solve the problems

all sorts/kinds of…

at home and abroad

one of …

be full of…

learn sth. by oneself

come up with good ideas

be surprised at sth.(to do sth.)

in order to

keep healthy/fit

a good way to v…

keep (on) trying

worry about…/ be worried about…

in one’s spare/free time

be kind/friendly to

be strict with

help others

say thank you to…

have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time plenty of +C/U

worry about/be worried about

ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for help be popular with…

share sth. with sb.

know little/much about …

do/try one’s best to v…

be/feel sorry for…

help sb. (to) do sth./ with sth.

in/during class

before/after class

teach sb. to do sth.